영작연습 프로젝트 Day 11

주제: The Impact of Social Media on Personal Relationships

소셜 미디어는 우리가 물리적으로 만나지 않고도 다른 사람들과 소통할 수 있는 수단을 제공한다. 이러한 점에서 긍정적으로 작용하는 부분은, 소통의 편리성을 크게 높여준다는 것이다. 예를 들어, 소셜 미디어를 통해 지구 반대편에 있는 사람들과도 실시간으로 대화할 수 있으며, 시간과 공간의 제약을 넘어설 수 있다. 이처럼, 소셜 미디어는 거리가 멀거나 바쁜 일상 속에서도 관계를 유지하는 데 중요한 역할을 한다.

그러나 부정적인 측면도 존재한다. 소셜 미디어의 과도한 사용은 대면 소통을 줄어들게 하여 사람들 간의 깊이 있는 연결감과 유대감을 약화시킬 수 있다. 직접 만나서 대화를 나누는 경험은 감정적인 교류와 신뢰 형성에 중요한 역할을 하는데, 이러한 대면 소통이 줄어들수록 관계의 질이 떨어질 가능성이 있다. 따라서 소셜 미디어는 적절하게 활용할 필요가 있으며, 대면 소통의 중요성을 간과하지 않아야 한다.

 

연습

Subject: The impact of Social Medial on Personal Relationships

Social Media provide communication means without physical meeting. In this point, as a positive effect, it has significantly enhanced the convenience of communication. For instance, we can 실시간으로talk with someone who lives in the opposite part of the globe through social media, and overcome the limit of time and space.

However, it also has a downside. The overuse of social media diminish interaction in person and cause a deep sensation of connection and trust to be weaken. The experience talking in person has a significant role in emotional communication and building trust, but as the contact communication is less, the quality of conversation is worse. In conclusion, we need to harness the use of social media properly and not to underestimate the importance of communication in person to person.

첨삭

Subject: The Impact of Social Media on Personal Relationships

Social Media provides a way for people to communicate without needing to meet face-to-face. One major positive is that it has significantly increased the convenience of communication. For instance, we can communicate in real-time with people on the opposite side of the world, overcoming time and distance barriers.

However, it also has a downside. The excessive use of social media reduces in person interactions, weakening the sense of connection and trust between people. Face-to-face conversations plays a crucial role in emotional bonding and building trust, but as these interactions decrease, the quality of relationships tends to diminish.

In conclusion, we need to use social media wisely and ensure that we do not overlook the importance of in-person communication for maintaining strong personal connections.

복습포인트

* 대면 소통

face-to-face communication

in-person communication 좀더 친근하게.

* "지구 반대편의 사람과 실시간으로"

talk in real-time with someone on the other side of the world.

have real-time conversation with people from the opposite side of the globe

connect instantly with people across the world

communicate live with someone halfway across the globe

* 간과하다: 중요성을 잊거나 고려하지 않는다는 의미. overlook/ neglect

* ~할수록 ~하다

The more you use it, the better it becomes.

AS you practice more, you improve faster.

The longer you wait, the harder it gets.

The more we rely on technology, the less we engage face-to-face.