영작연습 프로젝트 Day 68 focusing on one task at a time

 많은 사람들이 멀티태스킹이 효율적이라고 생각하지만, 실제로는 집중력을 분산시키고 작업의 질을 떨어뜨리는 경우가 많다. 대신 한 번에 한 가지 일에 집중하는 것이 더 높은 생산성과 성취감을 가져다줄 수 있다.

Many people think multitasking is efficient, but in reality, it divides concentration and reduce the quality of working. Instead of that, focusing one thing at once can bring the higher productivity and a sense of accomplishment.

첨삭

Many people believe that multitasking is efficient. However, in reality, it divides attention and reduces the quality of work. Instead, focusing on one task at a time can lead to greater productivity and stronger sense of accomplishment.

복습포인트'

*think 논리적 견해, 객관적 사고, 의견 / believe 단순한 생각을 넘어 신념이나 확신

*I think~ 대신 =It seems to me that

=In my opinion   =From my perspective  

*I strongly believe, I firmly believe,