주제: 온라인 쇼핑의 장점과 단점
온라인 쇼핑은 빠르고 편리하다는 장점이 있지만, 직접 물건을 보지 못해 품질을 확인하기 어렵다는 단점도 있습니다. 직접 상점을 방문하지 않아도 되는 시간 절약의 장점과, 예상과 다른 물건을 받았을 때 발생할 수 있는 실망감을 비교할 수 있습니다.
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Subject: benefits and drawbacks of online shopping
Online shopping is fast and convenient but it has also drawback that we can't guarantee the product's quality because we can't see it. We can compare the benefit of saving time comes from that we don't need to visit the shop in person and the sense of disappointment that we may get a bit different product unlike we expected.
첨삭
Subject: Benefits and Drawbacks of Online Shopping
Online shopping is fast and convenient, but it has the drawback of not being able to check the product's quality firsthand. While it saves time since we don't have to visit stores in person, there's always the risk of disappointment if the product doesn't match our expectations.
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