영작연습 프로젝트 Day 32 urban living allowing me to continue learning

 주제: 도시 생활과 시골 생활의 장단점

도시 생활과 시골 생활은 각각의 장단점이 뚜렷합니다. 먼저, 도시는 다양한 문화 활동과 편리한 교통 시스템, 그리고 일자리 기회가 많은 것이 장점입니다. 반면, 시골은 조용하고 자연과 가까운 생활을 할 수 있으며, 삶의 속도가 느리고 평화로워 스트레스가 적은 환경을 제공합니다.

저는 차가 없고 혼자 살기 때문에 접근성이 좋은 도시 생활이 더 적합합니다. 도시에서는 대중교통을 쉽게 이용할 수 있어 친구들을 만나거나 다양한 장소에 가는 것이 편리합니다. 또한, 다양한 커뮤니티 센터에서 강의를 들으며 배움의 기회를 얻을 수 있는 것도 큰 장점입니다.

결론적으로, 도시 생활은 저처럼 대중교통을 주로 이용하며 혼자 사는 사람에게 더 많은 기회를 제공하고, 친구들과의 교류나 다양한 활동을 즐길 수 있는 환경이기 때문에 저에게 더 적합하다고 생각합니다.

연습 

Subject: Benefits and Drawbacks of Urban life and Rural life

Living in urban and rural have have clear pros and cons. First, urban life is beneficial to have more approachable various cultural activities, convenient transportation system and to have a lot of choices for work. Meanwhile, rural life can provide quite and nature-friendly living, and stress less environment with slow and peaceful atmosphere.

Because I don't have a car and live by myself, I prefer to live in urban. Based on approachable public transportation in the city, it makes my life more convenient to hang out with my friends and visit a lot of places. Thus, it is a significant advantage to have an opportunity to learn while taking classes in the community center.

In conclusion, urban life can support a lot of opportunities who mainly use public transportation and live alone and it could be more social and cultural environment which fits me. 

첨삭

Subject: Benefits and Drawbacks of Urban Life and Rural Life

Living in both urban and rural areas has clear pros and cons. First, urban life offers more accessible cultural activities, a convenient transportation system, and a wide range of work opportunities. On the other hand, rural life provides a quiet, nature-friendly environment with less stress and a slower, more peaceful pace of life.

Since I don't have a car and live by myself, I prefer urban living. The accessible public transportation system in the city makes it easier for me to meet friends and visit various places. It also offers opportunities to engage in community center classes, allowing me to continue learning.

In conclusion, urban life supports those who rely on public transportation and live alone. It provides a more social and culturally rich environment, which suits my lifestyle. Additionally, it allows for a greater variety of activities and connections with others.

복습포인트

*"환경"

environment: 물리적/사회적/직업적. 예시로는 working environment, natural environment, polluted environment(오염된)

surroundings: 누군가와 가까운 주변 환경. 예시로는 pleasant surroundings(쾌적한 주변)

atmosphere: 감정적/정서적 분위기. 예시로는 a relaxing atmosphere(편안한), a tense atmosphere(긴장된)

* in urban areas, in urban living, in urban life, living in urban areas

urban은 형용사라서 명사를 동반해야 자연스럽다.

*"쉽게 접근할 수 있는"

easily accessible =convenient =within easy reach