영작연습 프로젝트 Day 63 proper distance is the key to building

 사람들과의 관계를 유지하려면 서로의 경계를 존중하는 것이 중요하다. 너무 많은 간섭은 갈등을 일으킬 수 있고, 너무 적은 관심은 관계를 소홀하게 만든다. 적절한 거리감을 유지하는 것은 건강한 관계의 핵심이다.

To maintain the relationship with people, it is important to respect personal boundaries each other. Give too much directions could cause conflicts and give too less interests could lose the relationship with them. Keeping the distance properly is a key to build healthy relationships.

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To maintain relationships with others, it is important to respect each other's personal boundaries. Giving too many directions could cause conflicts, while showing too little interest might weaken the relationship. Maintaining proper distance is the key to building healthy relationships.

복습포인트.

* key to ~ 에서는, ing 형태를 쓰는 것이 자연스럽다

예) They key to improving your health is regular exercise and a balanced diet.

*interest: 관심 을 의미. 셀 수 없는 명사.

interests: 취미, 분야