영작연습 프로젝트 Day 53 I've grown to love them since moving here

 나는 밴쿠버에 살아서 여름이 가장 좋다. 가을부터는 비가 많이 오지만, 여름에는 날씨가 좋고 다양한 축제가 열린다. 한국에서는 여름이 너무 더워서 싫었는데, 밴쿠버에 살면서 여름이 제일 좋아졌다. 특히, 여름밤의 시원한 공기를 맡으며 산책하는 것을 좋아한다.

연습

Because I live in Vancouver, Summer is best for me. It rains a lot since fall but during summer, the weather is lovely and a plenty of festivals are held. I hated hot summer when I was in Korea, I start to like summer since I live in this city. Especially, I like to go for a walk in the refreshing night of summer.

첨삭

Because I live in Vancouver, summer is my favorite season. It rains a lot starting in fall, but during summer, the weather is lovely, and plenty of festivals take place. I used to dislike the hot summers in Korea, but since moving here, I've grown to love them.  In particular, I enjoy taking walks in the cool, refreshing air of summer nights.

복습포인트

*점점 좋아지게 되었어! grow to love

예) I've grown to appreciate small towns after moving to one. 

*take place 어떤 이벤트 발생하다

*시원한 공기. 자연의 감각을 묘사할 때

예) I love the crisp, refreshing air of autumn mornings.

*난 이 계졀이 좋더라

Casual: I really love summer; it's the best time of the year for me.

Formal: Summer has always been my favorite season due to its vibrant energy.

              I'm particularly fond of summer because of its warm weather and festivities.

Descriptive: Nothing compares to the joy of summer with its bright skies and lively atmosphere.